Summary: Quick placeholder for this scene, more to come later. Or it will get chopped– not sure which.
NOTE: This is a very rough draft with no editing at all (per National Novel Wiriting Month rules) and is presented for amusement value only. Think of it as a periscope into my writing process rather than a coherent story!
There will most likely be spelling and grammatical errors afoot as well as flat out bad writing, info dumps, plot holes, contradictions/retcons, uneven characterization and pacing. These snippits are also posted out of order, so please refer to the Outline to figure out where it’s supposed to fit.
They worked their way to the outer rings without conversation, which was the only reason they noticed the other group of people before they had run into each other.
Unfortunately the other group spotted them at the same time Tan and Gray realized they had company and their alarmed shouts in a language they didn’t understand was enough to send Tan and Gray running again.
They’ve actually stumbled across Blue and his gang, but they don’t speak the language and they have no way of knowing that they work for Brian and not White. Blue and his group give chase, since they have no idea who Gray and Tan are and that they might be working for the other team.