That Don’t Impress Me Much : Part 21

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Wordcount: 160 words
Rating/Warnings: PG-13
Summary: May’s day suddenly gets more protagonisty!

NOTE: This is the first draft of a story, so it will most likely contain plot holes, retcons, and other inconsistencies. I’ll come back and fix things once the story (or arc) is complete!

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May Watches the Hatching

May watched the hatching with bemusement. Ferris was down at the edges playing with the now fluffy hatchlings. There was even one of the reds that seemed to be interested in him, but May had a feeling that it was as a temporary playmate rather than as a future rider. Still, Ferris was having a wonderful time and she was not about the shatter his dreams.

The mood of the gathering was somewhat dampered because of the golden foxhawk and there were some people who were keeping their distance and their kids distance. The hatchlings would not choose anyone for another three years, but there was folk wisdom that said their choices could be influenced by the early contact. One of the reasons her brother was soon keen on spending time with them.

She looked out across the gathering and her eyes met the golden hatchling’s.

And for a heartbeat, she could not see anything past those piercing yellow eyes.


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Martha Bechtel

My name is Martha Bechtel and I write fantasy and science fiction stories, paint small model horses silly colors, cast resin and plaster magnets, code random code (and Wordpress plugins)... Come on in and join in the fun!