Woven : Kidnap Building 2

Wordcount: 223
Rating/Warnings: PG
Summary: The weaver escapes, but at a cost.

NOTE: This is a very rough draft with no editing at all (per National Novel Wiriting Month rules) and is presented for amusement value only. Think of it as a periscope into my writing process rather than a coherent story!

There will most likely be spelling and grammatical errors afoot as well as flat out bad writing, info dumps, plot holes, contradictions/retcons, uneven characterization and pacing. These snippits are also posted out of order, so please refer to the story page to figure out where it’s supposed to fit.


Kidnap Building 2

They get to the other site at night and just as they get there they feel the other spider die. The weaver won’t die just then, but she will die very soon since she was older and is very reliant on the venom. So they have about a day before she’s gone, only she’d apparently venomed up in hopes of escape and she’s going into shock without the detox.

The other weaver is towards the end of the weaver lifespan and the spider was working to keep her alive, which is why it was so easy for them to capture her. The teenager that was with her was hurt but left behind. So she wasn’t expecting to get out of this alive.

The weaver can’t do anything to save her, but she waits until they have moved away from the storage room and then finds a way in. She gets in, the other weaver gives her a message for her friends, and then weaver and teacher leave. There is some sadness leaving her behind, but they know she is going to die and she can at least distract them,. The idea is that the weaver will attack the other folks if they come back in the room since they have untied her.

They flee out of the house and back towards the town.

Martha Bechtel

My name is Martha Bechtel and I write fantasy and science fiction stories, paint small model horses silly colors, cast resin and plaster magnets, code random code (and Wordpress plugins)... Come on in and join in the fun!

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